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Chance Missed by =RedEarthofTerra:iconRedEarthofTerra:

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The way I pull my nylons over my knee
makes me think.
The way I type these keys
makes me blush.

Along with your eyes on mine.

No, you don't know what it's like.
No, I'm not good at this.

I am so flawed.
And here's another...



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The more I learn about you
   the closer I want to be.
      The more I see you
The more I am ashamed of me.

I'm pretty
but not your type.
I'm funny
but not captivating.
But your eyes are to me
so I keep myself at a distance
regretably.

At the very least
I'd like you to trust me
But I've never been good
At that sort of thing.
©2008-2009 =RedEarthofTerra
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"What a wicked thing to do to make me dream of you. No, I don't want to fall in love with you (this love is only gonna break your heart)."

Jessa Rose :blackrose:
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Mood: Adoration ~Shades-of-Rainbow:iconShades-of-Rainbow: Apr 15, 2008, 5:36:50 PM
It's beautiful.

--
In Spring, as the seeds of hate are sown,
A tree of Love will sprout.
=RedEarthofTerra:iconRedEarthofTerra: Apr 15, 2008, 5:49:59 PM
Thanks :D

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"What a wicked game to play, to make me feel this way. What a wicked thing to do, to make me dream of you."
- Chris Issak

"Each time I fall I always underestimate
the gravity of you."

Jessa Rose :rose: :blackrose:
~Shades-of-Rainbow:iconShades-of-Rainbow: Apr 15, 2008, 5:54:25 PM
You are Welcome!! :hug: :hug:

--
In Spring, as the seeds of hate are sown,
A tree of Love will sprout.
~RhoPie:iconRhoPie: Apr 16, 2008, 7:18:49 AM
I don't know if you like it when people pick out their favourite lines, i know effamay does...
mine is:
"No, you don't know what it's like.
No, I'm not good at this."

fantastic poem :)

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|Rhiannon| For what it's worth it was worth all the while. I hope you had the time of your life...


For all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy.
~OrangeMinion:iconOrangeMinion: Apr 16, 2008, 4:38:43 PM
Ahhhhh, this is hella pretty Jessa
=RedEarthofTerra:iconRedEarthofTerra: Apr 16, 2008, 7:48:24 PM
:D Thanks.

--
"What a wicked game to play, to make me feel this way. What a wicked thing to do, to make me dream of you."
- Chris Issak

"Each time I fall I always underestimate
the gravity of you."

Jessa Rose :rose: :blackrose:
=RedEarthofTerra:iconRedEarthofTerra: Apr 16, 2008, 7:49:53 PM
I do like it when people do that. :D Thank you much.

--
"What a wicked game to play, to make me feel this way. What a wicked thing to do, to make me dream of you."
- Chris Issak

"Each time I fall I always underestimate
the gravity of you."

Jessa Rose :rose: :blackrose:
~navarre61636:iconnavarre61636: Apr 16, 2008, 8:02:22 PM
very beautiful and well written.
=RedEarthofTerra:iconRedEarthofTerra: Apr 16, 2008, 10:02:52 PM
Thanks, Nat :D

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"Somehow everything's gonna fall right into place, if we only had a way to make it all fall faster every day."
-Paramore

"I am the flash that turns the setting of sun
I am the voice behind thunder reminding you what you've done."

Jessa Rose :ro
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