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I would change but one thing, on the second stanzas first line, its not clear to me why you didnt use the rhyme and rhythm of the whole stanza and applied it to the first line too, like
Tears blinked from my eyes,
Sweat dropped for goodbyes.
Unrequited sighs.
I do not see a reason to be ashamed, not of this poem, or any other poem that reflects an outlet and feelings, and not of the subject.
Thanks much for the suggestion -- sometimes it takes another's eyes to see things clearly.
Thanks again! You just made my day brighter.
And I'm sorry to hear that, it's not a pleasant feeling.
Wanna talk about it?
because it's a fantastic piece of poetry,
that, secondly, reassures people like me that the feeling is universal.
Thank you, and again, thank you.